BRILLIANT, Wren! I adored the descriptive detail, the plotting, the “awww” ending. What a great job. You make the rest of us look like slackers! (You sure Kris didn't pay you to write this? *G*)
Well done Wren, this is awesome! I loved the few red herrings that you threw in there at first so that I wasn't entirely sure what was going on until that first dart was thrown :).
Suzi- thanks. I..um..I thought maybe I'd work on the next one I want to..um..y'know, sell. But you can read about Red and Wolfie on my blog *whistles and looks innocent*
To quote Kris, Wren – you rock! That was a lovely story – thank you SO much! And it's making me feel a lot more kindly about V-Day, which I too am not a fan of…
“Godzilla’s penis impaling King Kong’s ass!” ROFL! Awesome! Liked the story (and red herrings too). There are some startling similarities between this story and the one I submitted to Dreamspinner Press' Brush of Wings anthology but hey, great minds think alike. 🙂
Wren, it's OK. Seeing how I have telepathic connection with Chris while thinking about kinky people in furry costumes, it's obviously me who's to blame. I need to place an ad: GWM looking for a teacher (male, 25-40 yo, attractive) of controlling unwanted and impractical psychic abilities.
That was fabulous! I'm still smiling after finishing it :). Cute and witty and hot – everything that's good! Thanks for taking up the challenge so well! ^_^
Oh Wren, amazing job. I loved it. Such a sweet ending. Almost (almost) takes away my V-day cynicism. 🙂
BRILLIANT, Wren! I adored the descriptive detail, the plotting, the “awww” ending. What a great job. You make the rest of us look like slackers! (You sure Kris didn't pay you to write this? *G*)
Oh, the suspense!!! I have to wait until I get home from work to read the story. *mope*
*huge round of applause*
Well done Wren, this is awesome! I loved the few red herrings that you threw in there at first so that I wasn't entirely sure what was going on until that first dart was thrown :).
Tam – thanks. Cynicism is pretty ingrained, yeah? But I'm glad I almost gotcha!
KZ – shucks. And no, Kris didn't pay me. She has promised to be nice to me for all eternity, though.
Chris – Go home, then!
Jen – *curtsies* Thank you. Those red herrings are a little addictive, I've found.
Oh Wren, what a fabulous little story. I loved it!!
Great story Wren… I loved it.
You should write another one soon.
Suzi.
Woohoo 🙂 Great job Wren!
That was great!
Lily- thank you muchly!
Suzi- thanks. I..um..I thought maybe I'd work on the next one I want to..um..y'know, sell. But you can read about Red and Wolfie on my blog *whistles and looks innocent*
Ingrid – Thank you!
Elizabeth – Thanks!
You are teh awesome, Wren!
*warms up PayPal account for the next buyable story from Wren*
Wren: “And no, Kris didn't pay me. She has promised to be nice to me for all eternity, though.”
*Thank fuck I didn't sign that note in blood.*
Spectacular!
This is one of the very very few VD's short stories I've enjoyed! Great work, Wren 🙂
Chris – *grins*
Kris – That's not blood?
Eyre – *blushes*
Jitterbug – well, thanks!
To quote Kris, Wren – you rock! That was a lovely story – thank you SO much! And it's making me feel a lot more kindly about V-Day, which I too am not a fan of…
This was awetastic! Loved it!
“Godzilla’s
penis impaling King Kong’s ass!” ROFL! Awesome!
Liked the story (and red herrings too).
There are some startling similarities between this story and the one I submitted to Dreamspinner Press' Brush of Wings anthology but hey, great minds think alike. 🙂
Love this!!! Awesome job Wren!!!
Orannia – I'm so glad I was able to reduce the VDay Grinchiness a little *g*
Ferishia – Thank you!
Matthew – I'm glad you laughed at that line! I swear I did not mind meld with you when you weren't looking!
Jambrea – Thanks a bunch!
Wren, it's OK. Seeing how I have telepathic connection with Chris while thinking about kinky people in furry costumes, it's obviously me who's to blame.
I need to place an ad: GWM looking for a teacher (male, 25-40 yo, attractive) of controlling unwanted and impractical psychic abilities.
Matthew – mmph. Is that really all that should go into that ad?
That was great, Wren! Loved it. 🙂
Wren: Of course not. But I'm not going to post my stats and preferences here. 😉
Richelle – glad you liked it!
Matthew – Okay. I was just, y'know, checking…
Yeah, Wren.
Plus we all know that Matthew likes his cookies chocolate flavoured with twinky sprinkles.
Nothing is set in stone. 🙂
… or cookie batter… 😀
That was fabulous! I'm still smiling after finishing it :). Cute and witty and hot – everything that's good! Thanks for taking up the challenge so well!
^_^
Hi Clare *waves* Thanks. Cute and witty and hot = good! I am honored to be in such company.
Kris: Thanks for inviting me to write for your blog. It's been a blast!
That was adorable! Nice little twists and turns to keep it interesting. Great work!
(Can't wait for my turn, now!)
Jaime
“Can't wait for my turn, now!”
Just a few more days, Jaime, and the torch will be yours. *mwahahahaha!*
Excellent! I'm wrapping up a projectas we speak. Wouldn't want to be witout a deadline looing over me!
Thanks, Jaime! And good luck on your adventure with CYMMS!
“Wouldn't want to be witout a deadline looing over me!”
I've got a few that I can loan you if you really feel the need, Jaime. *g*
You're welcme, Wren. It was a fun read. 🙂
And Kris, thanks, but really, just the one will do. 😉
Damn.
It was a good try, though, Kris. 🙂
*mutterobviouslynotgooodenoughmutter*
Ah well. Can't win 'em all.
No we can't can we. *smiles sweetly*
*note to self: be even more mean than usual with choices*
Bring it on! hahaha!
The gloves are off now, baby!
Brilliant! That was a great story Wren. Wonderful job.
Thank you so much, Tracy!!