So. I read it.
Err. Can’t say I’m totally convinced about the getting off on darky, musky, earthy, strappy things.
What I do think came across very well in the story was the fact that it was a fetish and, hey, to each their own.
… what the heck was with all the “C’MON. SHOOT THAT MOTHERFUCKING LOADs” and “FUCK. I’M COMING. I’M COMINGs”?!?!
I was amazed that Gregg and Dar didn’t wake up half the planet with all the orgasmic yelling, not to mention Dar’s parents who were just down the friggin’ hall!
This actually put me off more than anything else in the book, including the jock huffing.
I mean I know that they were young and enthusiastic and all, but…
FYI, this is why God invented ball gags.